That's an extremely interesting and unique way to approach the topic! I like what you've done very much. Maybe be a little more descriptive in the author's comments. I wasn't able to see what were going for immediately. Either that or
Still, this is fantastic. There were only a few reasons that I didn't give you five stars. If you care about my opinion, send me a message or something (I don't know how newgrounds works). I normally try to explain what I see and give people advice, but this is an ongoing competition. I don't want to seem like I'm trying to detract from your odds of winning.
Best of luck! I'll be entering too, assuming I remember to work on my project, haha!